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Mrs Shaw's Class Book review

Hello,

I read a great book over the Easter break. It was called Odd and the Frost Giants. It was written by the author Neil Gaiman who has written other great books like Stardust, Coroline and The Wolves and the Walls. 

It is about Odd the Viking boy who has run away from home, even though he can barely walk and has to use a crutch. Alone in the forest, he encounters a bear, a fox and an eagle, each of whom has a strange story to tell. They need Odd's help to save the city of Asgard from the Frost Giants who have invaded it. 

It was very exciting, had excellent illustrations by Brett Helquist and really cool dialogue. 

Did you read anything over the holidays or could you recommend a good book? What can you tell me about the story, the characters, the descriptions or the dialogue? 

Mr Heskin

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Miss Farren's Class Book review

Hello,

I read a great book over the Easter break. It was called Odd and the Frost Giants. It was written by the author Neil Gaiman who has written other great books like Stardust, Coroline and The Wolves and the Walls. 

It is about Odd the Viking boy who has run away from home, even though he can barely walk and has to use a crutch. Alone in the forest, he encounters a bear, a fox and an eagle, each of whom has a strange story to tell. They need Odd's help to save the city of Asgard from the Frost Giants who have invaded it. 

It was very exciting, had excellent illustrations by Brett Helquist and really cool dialogue. 

Did you read anything over the holidays or could you recommend a good book? What can you tell me about the story, the characters, the descriptions or the dialogue? 

Mr Heskin

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Mrs Tredwell's Class Book review

Hello,

I read a great book over the Easter break. It was called Odd and the Frost Giants. It was written by the author Neil Gaiman who has written other great books like Stardust, Coroline and The Wolves and the Walls. 

It is about Odd the Viking boy who has run away from home, even though he can barely walk and has to use a crutch. Alone in the forest, he encounters a bear, a fox and an eagle, each of whom has a strange story to tell. They need Odd's help to save the city of Asgard from the Frost Giants who have invaded it. 

It was very exciting, had excellent illustrations by Brett Helquist and really cool dialogue. 

Did you read anything over the holidays or could you recommend a good book? What can you tell me about the story, the characters, the descriptions or the dialogue? 

Mr Heskin

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Mr Heskin's Class Book review

Hello,

I read a great book over the Easter break. It was called Odd and the Frost Giants. It was written by the author Neil Gaiman who has written other great books like Stardust, Coroline and The Wolves and the Walls. 

It is about Odd the Viking boy who has run away from home, even though he can barely walk and has to use a crutch. Alone in the forest, he encounters a bear, a fox and an eagle, each of whom has a strange story to tell. They need Odd's help to save the city of Asgard from the Frost Giants who have invaded it. 

It was very exciting, had excellent illustrations by Brett Helquist and really cool dialogue. 

Did you read anything over the holidays or could you recommend a good book? What can you tell me about the story, the characters, the descriptions or the dialogue? 

Mr Heskin

 

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Mrs Shaw's Class Writing Blog 2018

Hello children, 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it. 

Can you give them any ideas? 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

Thanks for your help!

Mr Heskin :)

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Mrs Tredwell's Class Writing Blog 2018

Hello children, 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it. 

Can you give them any ideas? 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

Thanks for your help!

Mr Heskin :)

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Miss Farren's Class Writing Blog 2018

Hello children, 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it. 

Can you give them any ideas? 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

Thanks for your help!

Mr Heskin :)

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Mr Heskin's Class Writing Blog 2018

Hello children,

 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it.

 

Can you give them any ideas?

 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

 

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

 

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

 

Thanks for your help!

 

Mr Heskin :)

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Miss Mustafa's class, please peer assess this piece of writing.

Hello children,

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it.

Can you give them any ideas?

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a Minotaur!

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

Thanks for your help!

Mr Heskin :)

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Mr Heskin's class, please peer assess this piece of writing.

Hello children,

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it.

Can you give them any ideas?

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a Minotaur!

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

Thanks for your help!

Mr Heskin :)

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Mr Smyth's class, please peer assess this piece of writing.

Hello Children,

 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it.

Can you give them any ideas?

 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

 

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

 

Thanks for your help!

 

Mr Heskin :)

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Miss Grimer's class, please peer assess this piece of writing.

Hello children, 

 

I have received this piece of writing from a pupil who wants help to improve it. 

 

Can you give them any ideas? 

 

One day I was walking home across the park I saw something in front of me. I did not know what it was. It seemed to be some sort of animal. I decided to keep walking passed it with my head down. As I walked directly passed my foot accidently hit the beast and it let out a long growl. I looked down and the beast started to get up. It was clearly in a bad mood because I woken it from its slumber. It looked me straight in the eyes. It was a minotaur!

 

Let me know what advice you have to give the writer to improve this paragraph.

 

(Tip - be as polite and diplomatic as you can be when you respond.)

 

Thanks for your help!

 

Mr Heskin :)

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